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the game.


Author: nameless_nobody
ASL Info:    18 in a few days.
Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 333 /421 /67
Words: 24
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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is it short and sweet or does it need more detail? its just a quick jotting i did during my dinner. what type of peom do you think it fits best?


the game.



Deal the cards,
Play your hand,
Bluff the game,
As best you can,
Roll the dice,
Place your bets,
Game of life,
No regrets.




Submitted on 2004-09-29 10:02:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I really liked the way that had a rythem, it sounded like you were actually in the middle of a card game and were telling us what was going through your mind as you were playing.
| Posted on 2004-09-29 00:00:00 | by lost and alone | [ Reply to This ]
  I like it 2! Fast & direct yet understandable! I don't know what else to say to such a short poem but it was nice really! Hope to read more from u peace!
| Posted on 2004-09-29 00:00:00 | by Cordell | [ Reply to This ]
  wow to tie gambling and life together like this is relevant to many an individual, life's a crap shoot, very nicely done, and I like the last line, however you decide to roll the dice in life, don't have any regrets...Bob:)
| Posted on 2004-09-29 00:00:00 | by poetryman | [ Reply to This ]
  Short and sweet. Not really sure what category it falls into, you would have to say since we aren't sure what intent you had in writing it.
| Posted on 2004-09-29 00:00:00 | by Cassius | [ Reply to This ]


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