Description: is it short and sweet or does it need more detail? its just a quick jotting i did during my dinner. what type of peom do you think it fits best?
the game. -------------------------------------------
Deal the cards,
Play your hand,
Bluff the game,
As best you can,
Roll the dice,
Place your bets,
Game of life,
No regrets.
I really liked the way that had a rythem, it sounded like you were actually in the middle of a card game and were telling us what was going through your mind as you were playing.
I like it 2! Fast & direct yet understandable! I don't know what else to say to such a short poem but it was nice really! Hope to read more from u peace!
wow to tie gambling and life together like this is relevant to many an individual, life's a crap shoot, very nicely done, and I like the last line, however you decide to roll the dice in life, don't have any regrets...Bob:)
Submission Name: the game.
