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    dots Submission Name: questionable presence in 3ddots
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    Author: crazyphreshone
    ASL Info:    31/M/NewYork
    Elite Ratio:    4.44 - 66/69/30
    Words: 85
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 367
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    Bytes: 613



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    dotsquestionable presence in 3ddots
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    Noone ever told me,
    life had no meaning.
    noone even told me
    human existance is a joke,or
    i have no meaning in what i wrote
    They cant appreciate unique perception,
    this soul and jesus share no connection.
    characters are judged and not trusted
    opposite genders nothing but lusted
    laughter and tears are exactly the same
    people misunderstood and always to blame

    this soul is lost destined to wander
    never to rest,never grow fonder
    my masterpiece yet to be written,known;
    maybe undiscoverd,now youve been told..




    Submitted on 2004-09-29 11:29:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Only my first day here and I notice a lot of negative view points on the world. I think the reason for this is that it inspires you to write more, then when everything is going good.
    | Posted on 2004-09-29 00:00:00 | by Cassius | [ Reply to This ]
      this to me sounds like your confused about life, but who isn't ? I really injoyed hearing your point of view on life, it raises some interesting questions and gives people something to think about. all in all i liked your poem.
    | Posted on 2004-09-29 00:00:00 | by lost and alone | [ Reply to This ]


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