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    dots Submission Name: Fairy Tale Weddingdots
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    Author: dax
    ASL Info:    35 male BC Canada
    Elite Ratio:    4.87 - 127/127/42
    Words: 94
    Class/Type: Poetry/Romance
    Total Views: 410
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    Description:
       a poem I wrote about the ideal wedding, thus the fairy tale wedding.


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    dotsFairy Tale Weddingdots
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    Cinderella gowned in snow white,
    Prince Charming is a gallant knight.
    Hearts of gold and love that's pure,
    happy ever after, of that we're sure.
    Joyous time for all who share,
    this celebration of love's affair.
    Banners, streamers, of colours bright,
    of laughing and dancing deep into night.
    A union of two, to make one,
    adventure in life of sunshine and fun.
    But on this day time is removed,
    to let love work on hearts approved.
    To join together in their forever,
    with love's bond acting as cord and tether.

    April 18, 2003




    Submitted on 2004-09-30 13:02:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Well, this is definitely the ideal type wedding right down to the fairy tale cast. I think you did a fine job with this one. It is a very happy and upbeat poem which is refreshing around here. So much sadness and turmoil in life, it is nice to find a happy poem to read. Of course, it certainly isnt easy to find this happily ever after in reality but it is fun trying anyway haha! This is a good write. I enjoyed it. Take care.

    Lorna
    | Posted on 2006-05-16 00:00:00 | by lmz | [ Reply to This ]
      This felt very...Medievel to me, and not in a bad way. Rather in the way of Knights and Damsels and riding off together on a white steed...elegant and the stuff of fairytales, indeed...
    | Posted on 2004-09-30 00:00:00 | by Emerging Soul | [ Reply to This ]



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