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    dots Submission Name: Too Closedots
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    Author: Emerging Soul
    ASL Info:    45/VERY female/Wisconsin
    Elite Ratio:    4.36 - 1238/1114/244
    Words: 42
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsToo Closedots
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    So many young girls
    Avoiding mirrors
    Yet photographing pieces
    As though assembling a puzzle
    Square tabs forced
    Into round spaces
    Working from the inside-out
    Never seeing the "Big Picture"
    For they are
    Too close
    Too blinded by the
    Discordant views
    Of themselves




    Submitted on 2004-09-30 13:05:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Oh how society loves to dictate to its members. I think nobody is more attentive to the mad professor's ravings than youths, especially females. Too bad too, because if they didn't see the discordant views in a de facto negative light, they would realize that each shard of that mirror has an entire world of truth in it for their taking - if they choose to examine it of course.
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    | Posted on 2004-09-30 00:00:00 | by particularshard | [ Reply to This ]


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