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    dots Submission Name: An Angel in Moonlightdots
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    Author: dax
    ASL Info:    35 male BC Canada
    Elite Ratio:    4.87 - 127/127/42
    Words: 73
    Class/Type: Poetry/Romance
    Total Views: 361
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 561



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       my imagination taking me prisoner


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    dotsAn Angel in Moonlightdots
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    Gliding through mist and shadow,
    milky moonlight cascades down.
    Silky brunette hair aglow
    with the aura of a halo.
    Pale pure skin radiating
    from the kisses of the beams.
    Silver sequin gown adorns
    her like the heaven's stars.
    Stitched against black velvet
    draped on mortal's flesh.
    Eyes like waters of seas
    gleaming beneath night.
    Arms stretched like wings
    as if taking flight.
    An angel in moonlight,
    she must be.

    September 23, 2004




    Submitted on 2004-09-30 13:07:26     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      O what imagery !
    I has this classic touch about it
    Although people generaly do not like mere imagery these days
    But I think it was quite differamy !
    | Posted on 2004-09-30 00:00:00 | by moaxcym | [ Reply to This ]
      I like it a lot overall. One thing that threw me a little was "draped on mortal's flesh." That line to me seems a little dark and not really in the tone you are trying to set.
    | Posted on 2004-09-30 00:00:00 | by Cassius | [ Reply to This ]



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