Description: this is a piece I wrote for my friend(my brother form another mother) Mark after his one year old nephew died from medical complications...I was in Spain at the time and this was the only way I knew how to tell him how sorry I was for him but that I am here.
this is really good. its awesome how you can be loyal that way to someone. i just wish that there could be more people like that. but we live in an evil world... and no matter how much evil there is we still gotta shine our light for others to see.
This is a great way to support someone. I feel bad for your friend, but I'm glad that he has someone as wonderful as you are to hold on to when times get rough. The piece is good, with a solid writing style and good imagery, but it feels wrong critiquing such a thoughtful piece of poetry. Good write. -Archadya