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i am fake

Author: brokenmirror
ASL Info:    150/f/duiuwy89
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strange...... yathink

i am fake

your ego has blinded you
what makes you so good anyway?
your loud, obnoxious laughter
your phony, forced smile
your made up excused and lies
or is it the pound of make up you apply every morning
before heading off to cause more distruction and heartache
please, put on that xtra small designer shirt
oh, and dont forget the heels
and of course, the day cant be completed without you saying "im so ugly"
okay, so you are...big glad that you realize that
well, i'm really not a jealous person
i'm just the type that kind of dislikes those fake people
but, to be honest, im lying to myself
because, when i do see you
i go along with the whole act
i tell you "oh, you're not fat, you're not ugly!" or "i love your shirt!"...of course, its what you want to hear
i, myself, may join in on your obnoxious laughter
so..who is the worse person?
the one that lies to others
or the one that lies to herself

Submitted on 2004-09-30 19:05:53     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  This is a very intersting poem. Most people cna relate to it. Everyone lies to others, but it is worse to lie to yourself. Nice work. Keep it up.
| Posted on 2004-09-30 00:00:00 | by Kera | [ Reply to This ]

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