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    dots Submission Name: To Define Medots
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    Author: cuddledumplin
    ASL Info:    36/ f/UK
    Elite Ratio:    4.08 - 6269/5927/526
    Words: 32
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsTo Define Medots
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    I don't need you to define me.
    I was a woman before we met,
    and will be one after I leave,
    and I'm not naked
    I don't need to wear your name.




    Submitted on 2004-09-30 20:52:49     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      to the point! yeah! i always thought it was strange that women took men's names when they married. if you think about it, you can only really trace a child from the mother, right? so why don't men take women's names when they marry? makes sense to me! this is great!
    | Posted on 2004-10-03 00:00:00 | by magnicat | [ Reply to This ]
      after reading the first lines I wasn't so convinced by this poem. pretty simple, nothing poetic, just a statement. but you did it with the ending. the last two lines
    "And I'm not naked
    I don't need to wear your name"
    are the one which make the poem. they're great. that's the slap in the face the poem needed.
    | Posted on 2004-10-02 00:00:00 | by eve1684 | [ Reply to This ]
      I hate it when men think that just because we are women we 'need' a guy. We 'need' them to be a woman. Ugh! This was a very strong write. It had power to it. As if saying, screw you, I'm a Woman. Great job.
    -blt
    | Posted on 2004-10-02 00:00:00 | by borderlinetears | [ Reply to This ]
      My response to this piece was short and wordless but extremely significant, so I am breaking with my usual abhorrence of such practices and filling this with extra words so that it's long enough to post. My response was as follows:

    *nod*
    | Posted on 2004-10-02 00:00:00 | by Ontlogicalamity | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow...great poem, short, sweet, and right to the point. For such a short poem, it said so much. I loved the last two lines. Keep up the good work!
    | Posted on 2004-09-30 00:00:00 | by Babysweet56 | [ Reply to This ]
      shor simple and states your point. i like it its short like one of mine called : perfect lie ... maybe you wantto see it ... bye
    | Posted on 2004-09-30 00:00:00 | by Wolfdawn | [ Reply to This ]
      short and simple. had i not read your description i would have thought you were talking about the lables people put on each other. but i dont alway read between the lines very well either. this is good.
    | Posted on 2004-09-30 00:00:00 | by 3TOMANY | [ Reply to This ]


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