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    dots Submission Name: Pseudo Adolescencedots
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    Author: halopop
    ASL Info:    25/f/FL
    Elite Ratio:    4.24 - 167/141/21
    Words: 237
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Nostalgia
    Total Views: 521
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1503



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       this was my attempt at writing a song... at 4:30 in the morning... dreading the fact that i had to be at my lovely job in 2 hours...


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    dotsPseudo Adolescencedots
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    Hello it's me
    remember me from way back when?
    lost in confusion of circular anguish
    I seem to have lost myself again
    turn the bright lights on
    and help me see from now to then
    I want to live the childhood that I never lived again
    reflections of the memories of events that never happened
    will guide me towards a premonition of the person that I've become

    Hello it's me again
    walking far behind my shadow's presence
    a victim of pseudo adolescence
    flying high beneath myself
    searching for the answers to the
    questions I never asked
    in an animated coffin I buried
    5 feet 6 above the ground & without a sound
    my coffin falls like a teardrop upon the ground

    Hello it's me
    in a full length coat of pity
    in the brightest shade of loneliness
    I've been weaving all these years
    I always stop to smell the flowers
    and call upon a higher power
    to comprehend this freshly painted
    collage of all my tears

    Hello it's me again
    in this losing battle which has just begun
    the teardrops come, but the only thing I wanted
    was to have a little fun
    some time to think about the past
    as I run naked through the grass
    holy sh!t man time moves fast
    when you're felling down
    just start a new life in some other town




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