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    dots Submission Name: Radiating the Heartdots
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    Author: colopoao
    ASL Info:    42/ Male / Hallowell Mai
    Elite Ratio:    4.89 - 62/55/18
    Words: 57
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Description:
       I was having fun with these four words. As a computer programmer I deal with acronyms every day. I wanted to look a little deeper into these words that make up the basis of human life and existence.

    I hope you like it. Have a great day.....

    Chris Osgood


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    dotsRadiating the Heartdots
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    "Radiating the Heart"



    Doing
    Everything
    As
    They
    Have

    Focusing
    Everything
    Around
    Religion

    Learning
    Is
    Fealing
    Eternally

    Beautiful
    Inside
    Radiating
    The
    Heart


    Death?
    Fear?
    Life?
    Birth.....


    Chris Osgood 10/1/04




    Submitted on 2004-10-01 17:57:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      quite a unique poem. the meaning isn't exactly new but the form is a rarity. i like the way you described these four coz they mostly draw their own lines of definition with time.
    | Posted on 2004-10-01 00:00:00 | by ANGELO | [ Reply to This ]


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