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    dots Submission Name: Kafka Dreamsdots
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    Author: cuddledumplin
    ASL Info:    36/ f/UK
    Elite Ratio:    4.08 - 6269/5927/526
    Words: 66
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       I know this isn't a masterpiece, but I just feel like honoring Kafka today.


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    dotsKafka Dreamsdots
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    Sometimes I feel like Samsa,
    sometimes like Josef K.
    I always feel like an outcast
    just like the Bohemian wolf-man you were
    just like your ever-suffering heroes,
    repressed and isolated,
    cold and imprisoned.
    I am a hunger artist:
    I hunger for your symbolism...
    Sometimes I feel like Kafka.




    Submitted on 2004-03-02 09:18:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      hm... I don't know who the people are, but I can see there is emotion here. If you can explain the people references, please do. <><
    | Posted on 2004-03-23 00:00:00 | by WorththeWait | [ Reply to This ]
      I like this, especially
    "I am a hunger artist
    I hunger for your symbolism"
    It is a nice tribute to Kafka and good expression of your admiration for him. Thanks, Silver
    | Posted on 2004-03-02 00:00:00 | by Silverdog | [ Reply to This ]
      I like your poems....but I don't know who any of the people in the poem was but its okay because it didn't really matter. I knew what you meant and I love the analogy. Keep them coming I want to hear more!
    | Posted on 2004-03-02 00:00:00 | by Nashataku | [ Reply to This ]
      I dont know how you do it... you have the best word choices and they always seem to be unique to your writes, as it seems each one is individual and unique in its own way, yet you hold onto your same style... I find that hard to do, and even harder to keep em short like this. creating rhythm and flow, yet not dependent on rhyme.. nice style, nice write, keep em coming
    | Posted on 2004-03-02 00:00:00 | by Crash | [ Reply to This ]
      I liked this, and get this. I acually got it..lol new one for me..haha..this was good. I thought so keep it up..Huggs
    | Posted on 2004-03-02 00:00:00 | by TastemyTears | [ Reply to This ]


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