Description: I was cleaning my room the other day and I found this. I wrote it several years ago. It's really short, but I didn't want to say much. That was all I wanted to say, so I left it at that.
Daddy -------------------------------------------
When you see
the bottom of the bottle,
are you thinking
of us then?
Merry Meet again Eyes. I am gonna take a risk and say your Dad is an alcoholic. My Dad is too. I felt that way so many times growing up. I am fortunate that my Father is finally in recovery and I hope yours is too. Thank you for putting into words what I wanted to ask my Dad so many times as a child and teen. It's good to know I wasn't the only one. Blessed Be Andrea
it may be short but it speaks volumes to someone who knows what you are going through. i commented on Daddy [2] before seeing this so i gather you know my dad is an alcoholic. i used to wonder the same things. when you run out of stuff to drink, is that when you remember that you have 2 daughters, 3 ex step children, and 2 ex wives? one day i figure on acctually asking him but until then i've atleast learned how to ask the question. thanks. PS
btw. i'd like your opinion on "Minus One and Answers" i wrote them about my dad. your thoughts would be much appreciated. thanks.
Ooh, this is very good. I like the minimalism, and it is exceptional for an 11 or 12 year old. There's nothing to criticize here, so I'll just say "good job."
for an 11 or 12 year old (you said you wrote it several years ago) to write something like this, is pretty good. I like it. It's short and powerful, it has a pow! to it. and the way it's phrased, I can tell that alot of emotion was released when you wrote it. I can tell you put alot of raw feeling into it. true feeling, candid feeling.
well, since you wrote it a few years back, i have to say that its very powerful...it makes me wonder actually, and how its just so short its like an abrupt stop that makes me wonder...i like it a lot...
Submission Name: Daddy
