Description: Uuhh yeah, another poem about the people that I live for. It was a fun time in my life, but also a very frightening one too because I became really dependent emotionally on my friends. I don't regret it because some awesome memories were made, but I think that now I've gotten my feelings out about it, I'm ready to move on...maybe
You're still here, but I've lost you forever.
And every time I see you,
A chain of images flicker through my mind,
Little dancing lights that betray my sanity.
A tampon-banana still-life
Black compact make-up strewn across the table
A shivering mass standing in front of the theater
Dairy soaring through the air
Loogies launched off the tip of a pen
A sloppy lipstick message on a hotel mirror
A whipcream "HI!" plastered to a wall
And 3 figures huddled in embrace at the entrance to Union Station.
And with each image that
Passes through my mind,
My heart is branded:
Prisoner to a handful of inspirational fortune cookies.
this was absolutely beautiful, i could see it all in my mind and it was heartbreaking and sweet and just amazing! oh yes, and just a warning, gothicsweetness has been putting that comment on everybody's poems, what a jerk eh? a poem like this deserves a real comment.
I LIKE IT ALOT, I think that you should keep writing. You have so much potential. Keep up the good work. . If you want email me at gothic_sweetness_420@yahoo.com I would love to hear from you
ok I know you're not supposed to give alot of compliments, but I can't help it, this piece was written by god himself. I love it. I'll read more of you. It made me feel like I am on top of the world, it made me feel good, it made me feel like god, it made me feel so damn good inside my heart, thank you. I have nothing to say along the lines of improving it. how the hell could a 15 year old write this?
Submission Name: Nostalgia
. If you want email me at gothic_sweetness_420@yahoo.com I would love to hear from you 