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    dots Submission Name: DADDY DEARESTdots
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    Author: gothicsweetness
    ASL Info:    20 F Idaho
    Elite Ratio:    4.62 - 14/20/7
    Words: 408
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 896
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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       It's just something that happened to me and I wanted it to be heard what some daddys actually do to their little girls.


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    dotsDADDY DEARESTdots
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    Peering eyes, through the darkness
    Blood stains on the carpet
    Screams from the front room
    The crashing and breaking of things

    My sisters cower toward my room
    Afraid to see if DADDY saw them.
    "He hit her, He hit her" as they whispered
    "Come to bed, I'll be right back."
    Now my parents were downstairs
    Probably fucking I presume.
    I filled a pail of hot, soapy water
    washing down the walls and floors waking up at 4:30 in the morning making DADDY'S breakfast.
    He slapped me "YOU LITTLE BITCH IT WASN'T DONT RIGHT, NEXT TIME DO IT BETTER!!"
    I looked down with tears in my eyes whispering "okay daddy I will."
    After he left mommy came up, "Is he gone??" she asked.
    Looking at me with her lip bloody her face swollen.
    "Yes" she heard the tears in my voice.
    I went to school. And came home and cleaned up yet another mess from them.
    Late at night around 11:00 DADDY came in and put his hand on my shoulder.
    "I'm sorry sweetie, I'll make it better" with that said he crawled in my bed and started doing things that daddys arn't supposed to do. I didn't move or resist because I was afraid of getting beaten.
    He did this until I was 11
    I got tired of it and pulled a gun on him.
    "DADDYS DONT TOUCH GIRLS IN THEIR PRIVATE PARTS, DADDYS DONT KISS THEIR GIRLS WITH THEIR TONGUES DADDYS DONT PUT THINGS INSIDE THEIR GIRLS THINGS," I said. that all nicely then I finally yelled. " DADDYS DONT HURT THEIR GIRLS OR MOMMYS THEY DONT RAISE HANDS, DO DRUGS THEN SAY ITS GONNA BE ALL RIGHT." He came after me with hate and rage in his eyes.
    "YOU LITTLE BITCH ALL LITTLE GIRLS GO THOUGH THIS, ALL DADDYS DO IT."
    "LIAR, LIAR FUCK YOU GO TO HELL, I HATE YOU."
    he grabbed my and threw me, I was hurt.
    He jumped on ,e like a wild animal.
    Denny saw daddy doing this and tried to help me
    it didn't work denny got thrown down the stairs and finally it ended,
    I couldn't move, I was scared
    Daddy got put in jail, but not for doing what he did to me
    I was so hurt so disgusted that it hurt so much for me to move. I layed and cried and cried.
    over and over in my head...
    "Daddys don't...Daddys don't....."




    Submitted on 2004-10-02 14:36:34     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I like it too. This story, it's so dark and creepy. Made me have a sick feeling in my stomach... which iguess i should be getting that feeling. Itr was your intent, was it not? The line where you say "He jumped on..." You mispelled "me" or mistyped it. That's the only thing wrong in your whole story. Keep it up.
    Aken Sol
    | Posted on 2004-10-08 00:00:00 | by Aken Sol | [ Reply to This ]
      I LIKE IT ALOT, I think that you should keep writing. You have so much potential. Keep up the good work. If you want email me at gothic_sweetness_420@yahoo.com I would love to hear from you.

    you know, before i realized that you've been using that comment on everyone, i probably would have commented on this and been really nice. but now, i think you're just making this up. grow up.
    | Posted on 2004-10-02 00:00:00 | by purple dinosaur | [ Reply to This ]
      Um, wow, this was...intense, I guess. It wasn't the normal, flowy poem, it's more like a story. Sometimes I really hate my dad because he's an alcoholic, but (I hate to say it) I still love him because there are worse things he could do...like this. I really am sorry that this happened and it disgusts me that such things can happen in the world.
    | Posted on 2004-10-02 00:00:00 | by Kalidoscopeeyes | [ Reply to This ]


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