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    dots Submission Name: the bloodwraithdots
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    Author: fallenelf
    ASL Info:    19/f/pa
    Elite Ratio:    2.6 - 43/56/23
    Words: 118
    Class/Type: Poetry/
    Total Views: 289
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 749



    Description:
       intro to a story my friend is writing


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    dotsthe bloodwraithdots
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    his eyes the stare of death
    a red that burns so deep inside
    you dream of things that sneak and flee
    he possesses your lonely heart
    a puppet master of thee
    never to die never to survive
    you are one with he
    a daunting figure
    a mirror trick
    a creature begging blood
    the shadowed controller of your mind
    disembodied, hidden to their kind
    a killer, a drainer of souls that yearn
    a life away from here
    no magic, no power does he believe
    can stray him from his sadistic grieve
    only those who learn him best
    are able to free their sorcery
    thus their surge of hatred of the one
    twill be their rising of the land's misery




    Submitted on 2004-10-02 15:12:25     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      hey, nice piece here. Sounds interesting if this is the intro to your friends story. Tho, parts of your poem are a bit confusing...

    ->Dark
    | Posted on 2004-10-07 00:00:00 | by drk_angl_17 | [ Reply to This ]
      i like this piece. i dont really know how to explain it or how i feel about it. but i like how it has a dark side to it though. it is some intro to that story though. this also reminds me a lot of deception, and hatred, yet so decieving it comes off as love. or shall i say lust. well.. nice work.
    | Posted on 2004-10-02 00:00:00 | by BrokenRose | [ Reply to This ]



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