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    dots Submission Name: Battle Angelsdots
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    Author: Leila
    ASL Info:    19/female/South Africa
    Elite Ratio:    4.23 - 98/85/18
    Words: 97
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 383
    Average Vote:    3.0000
    Bytes: 689



    Description:
       There are no real metaphors here, merely a fantasy- type poem inspired by a picture.


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    dotsBattle Angelsdots
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    Their minds ease to peaceful tranquility,
    as the angels sharpen their skilled swords
    and strengthen their callous armour,
    for the moonlight battle, wicked and epic,
    will surely bring bloodshed and deliverance.

    In the midst of the open enchanted forest
    the angels wait, beauteous and divine,
    blessed by Aphrodite herself,
    with the raging strength of Hercules
    and the stoned heart of Ares.

    Evil will be defeated, as always,
    with the swift grace of their blades.
    Fairies will war-dance and cry sweet tears
    when the moon spills crimson
    and the battle angels put down their arms.




    Submitted on 2004-10-02 20:04:34     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      You pulled through again. Describing an on going battle or struggle between good and evil. With this piece I was taken away to the prep work for the battle on all 3 sides. As they shappend there SKILLED swords for a MOONLITE battle wow. Yes my mind drifted into your page to me that is a good write ty I enjoyed this piece.


    Sincerly Gannondalf aka Big Bear
    | Posted on 2006-05-03 00:00:00 | by Gannondalf | [ Reply to This ]
      that was an intense poem...what piture was it...sounds great...it was a very logical way to look at thinks gods, faries, angels, a very nice mesh, i really like the theatric of this, teh epic battle...i don't know what to say...this is great
    | Posted on 2004-10-02 00:00:00 | by milo stills | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow that was awesome. The imagery really pulled me in and I like how you used mythological characters from different backgrounds. It instantly created a world for me to step into and invited me openly to do so. Nice write. I'll keep reading as long as you keep submitting.
    | Posted on 2004-10-02 00:00:00 | by Lightbringer | [ Reply to This ]



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