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    dots Submission Name: the prophecy of hastedots
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    Author: crazyphreshone
    ASL Info:    31/M/NewYork
    Elite Ratio:    4.44 - 66/69/30
    Words: 38
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 362
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 294



    Description:
       you could call this venerable,if you know what i mean...


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    dotsthe prophecy of hastedots
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    That wicked premonition,
    which has no description,
    dropping the non-fiction.
    Yes,truths we're ashamed to boast,
    which come first and foremost;
    there's no need to look pretty,or come off quick and witty,
    i thieve your thoughts at my fitting...




    Submitted on 2004-10-03 01:12:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I don't get it. I understand that there's something to get, but I really don't get it. Its like feeling something under murky water. I think I disagree - I'm not sure why. Perhaps it isn't venerable. Veneration must come from somebody venerating right? To venerate urself is masturbation.
    shard
    | Posted on 2004-10-03 00:00:00 | by particularshard | [ Reply to This ]
      damn, that was cool. I like the style. It's like an "I don't give a - - - " style. that is cool.
    at first I didn't know what you were talking about, but as I kept reading I began to feel it and vibe with it.
    that's my unbiased review.
    | Posted on 2004-10-18 00:00:00 | by max | [ Reply to This ]


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