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    dots Submission Name: SoulMatesdots
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    Author: Timmy S. Edgar
    ASL Info:    38 male Melb, Australia
    Elite Ratio:    2.6 - 263/200/71
    Words: 196
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 1116
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1118



    Description:
       Another written for the one & only true love



    i Love you Heather


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsSoulMatesdots
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    Never thought I could, be so blessed
    My lifeís so enriched & itís thanks to you
    Although our time, itís not just yet
    My love for you, seen my dreams come true

    See when I am with you, thereís nothing else
    No one, not ever could come close, not one
    Cause youíre my everything, my life, my muse
    Itís about your heart, your soul & how I love you hon

    If I werenít to be, so blessed to know you
    My life would be so dull my girl & so unclear
    As you always lift me up with, your sweet love
    To me such happiness, enough to cause a tear

    I thank you babes, for being in my life
    Promise me forever youíll always be there
    Canít think of a life without you here
    To each other my dove, this would be, unfair

    In closing this love poem thatís written for you
    Know in your heart Timmy is always close & not far
    Know that I love you forever & a day, yet eternally
    Youíre my soul my heart my life & I love you forever

    Timmy S. Edgar




    Submitted on 2004-03-02 12:22:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      there are some grammar mistakes/forced rhymes but...this is really cool. Welcome to the site...
    It seems that at least one girl out there has found her true love, so good for her!
    looking forward to reading some more stuff.
    AK
    | Posted on 2004-03-06 00:00:00 | by deadlydarkdevil | [ Reply to This ]


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