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    dots Submission Name: the legenddots
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    Author: fallenelf
    ASL Info:    19/f/pa
    Elite Ratio:    2.6 - 43/56/23
    Words: 161
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 259
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1154



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       someone pleeease comment on this one. and guess which final fantasy character it is


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    dotsthe legenddots
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    slowly passing within this land
    its essence never felt
    the face of the world buried beneath
    the monuments of the past
    creatures faint away
    as they see his approach
    a solitary figure never hesitant
    before the unerring path he dared not follow
    the passage haunting his memories
    yet never forgoing his dominance of the visages who challenge him
    translucent images retreat
    soft floating spheres of light
    radiate from his mind
    drifting off into the void
    the afterlife beyond
    his otherworld his land in dreams
    was half a life to he
    only to gaze at possibilities to come
    stagnant thoughts trapped within
    a sole journey into his fate
    never to return to this false conciousness
    a reverie world that passed
    eliminated silently
    only he, flickering between
    his last companion slung over his shoulder
    a long deadly blade reflecting the blood red sun
    a burning flare mirroring his lost soul
    emotions taken, feelings broken
    his legacy intertwined with the evil of the world




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