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wonderful world?


Author: nameless_nobody
ASL Info:    18 in a few days.
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Words: 107
Class/Type: Lyrics /Misc
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got the lyrics from an old song and changed the lyrics a bit to reflect the modern world better. its kinda shitty but what ya gona do. all coments welcome


wonderful world?



I see trees chopped........ red roses too
I watch 'em burn..... for me and for you
And I think to myself.... what a wonderful world.

I see poluted skies..... destruction rife
dark depressed days.... cold sleepless nights
And I think to myself .....what a wonderful world.

The colors of a death.....so scarey ..in the sky
Are there on the faces.....of people ..going by
I see friends shaking hands.....sayin'.. how do you do
They're really sayin'......I hate you.

I hear babies starve...... I watch them die
they will feel less pain.....than than the ones that survive
And I think to myself .....what a .........world




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  I always like hearing parodies. This one sounds like something they would put on Adult Swim or the Simpsons. Definitely a bit pessimistic, but well-done.
jan
| Posted on 2004-10-14 00:00:00 | by jaycee | [ Reply to This ]
  wow. this is kinda scary. I like this alot. i like the last stanza best just kinda sums up the f*cked up place. you did good. I didn't recognize the song it came from at first but then i did. Good job.
Pryncess
PS i learned a new word from this poem cool beans
| Posted on 2004-10-06 00:00:00 | by PryncessVynom | [ Reply to This ]


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