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    dots Submission Name: What's On 1983's Mind?dots
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    Author: max
    ASL Info:    27 m tennessee
    Elite Ratio:    3.5 - 152/191/55
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    dotsWhat's On 1983's Mind?dots
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    If he could talk, would you listen?
    if he said, "hello," would you say "hello" back?

    if he touched you would you turn to gold?

    if a penny started talking to you, would Lincoln
    have long hair?
    a beard perhaps?


    just wondering what's on Lincoln's mind.





    Submitted on 2004-10-04 21:55:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Only thing that comes to mind is that one Simpson's episode when homer found a penny and Lincoln winked at him.So i'm guessing you yourself,came upon a mystic penny,at a crucial time on that year,Wondering of how to fix whatever problems you had,Wondering what's on Lincoln mind and how he would go about such dilemma.Ofcourse i could be wrong.This is a mindbending piece,Excellent work!-Vlad09
    | Posted on 2004-10-06 00:00:00 | by Damien Vladimir | [ Reply to This ]
      im guessing lincoln is on some kinda coin over there... im not from america and that is the closest i can get to what you might be about... but yeah... kinda cryptic... at first im like sure id say hello back and at the end and thinking its a coin your on about i would still prolly say hi back LOL! but thats just me... i wouldnt imagine he would have much on his mind though coz i believe he is quite dead but yeah... as i said before kinda cryptic... definately different but different is a good thing...
    | Posted on 2004-10-05 00:00:00 | by Someones Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]
      probably not much of anything...he's dead...and its just a minted piece of copper...lol

    kind of sporadic and nonsensical, but it's a quirky little rambling. I can deal with it...although I'm not keen on the turning to gold part, maybe if a penny was made of gold, it would make more sense, but it's not, so it doesnt...well, ya know...nevermind
    | Posted on 2004-10-04 00:00:00 | by Kristina9178 | [ Reply to This ]


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