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    dots Submission Name: Babydots
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    Author: drkpoet
    ASL Info:    21/m/NJ
    Elite Ratio:    3.04 - 442/527/94
    Words: 185
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
    Total Views: 419
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1132



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       Sweet words of wisdom only if i could work up the courage to tell her how i really feel... this is just a sample...


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    dotsBabydots
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    Your body is my temple,
    Your wisdom is my truth
    Baby let me tell you one thing,
    Baby girl I truly love you.

    These words I hope don’t scare you
    I hope they mean to you
    What they have meant to me.
    Baby let me tell you it’s true.

    Your smile heals my sorrow
    The sway of your hips
    Cures my broken heart.
    Those lips helps the feelings strive.

    Baby,
    You’re my girl
    And let me tell you once more
    Baby, I love you.

    These words are rarely give,
    And given out to be true,
    And I hope it helps you out,
    Cause baby there’s a question I have for you.

    What I have is yours,
    What I want is yours
    I would like to take your hand
    I would like you to say “I do”
    Baby, here’s the question,
    Baby, will you be mine,
    Through the hard,
    The rough
    And the great times?

    Baby, will you marry me,
    Help me set my soul free,
    Love me too baby
    Will your love be with me?






    Submitted on 2004-10-05 21:07:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      words of love from our darkpoet? maybe you'll have to change your moniker. This is sweet and heartfelt. maybe not the most original but that's love for ya. It's all original to you when your going through it though. Why are I love you, marry me the scarriest words to say?
    Good luck with it.
    jan
    | Posted on 2004-10-05 00:00:00 | by jaycee | [ Reply to This ]
      htis is a great poem and i like how you can speak so highly of love.. that means u aint been hurt, yet. anyways the structure is odd but i never got that stuff anyways! keep it up great job.
    | Posted on 2004-10-05 00:00:00 | by blonde_honey418 | [ Reply to This ]



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