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    Author: honus
    Elite Ratio:    4.78 - 90/96/32
    Words: 88
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    She glimpsed death,
    it's tangled,
    black birch branches
    caught her as

    She shone in clusters
    segmenting in the wood
    wrapped by
    spiney hands
    dripping sap

    street lights
    and horns
    below the dirty
    window sill

    blanlets and brassier
    clasped to her chin

    she saw death,
    he sang wind
    into her ears

    empty meters
    flashed for coins
    below twitching legs
    that ran out

    into a black field of
    starched stalks
    his moonlit limbs
    stretching to embrace

    her,
    closing,
    sticky with residue




    Submitted on 2004-10-06 04:44:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      A grim reaper,you seem to be that creature,as you discover the dying soul of this girl.Grasping details of the horrid incident as it eventually lead to that scenario.the body been found, and taken in by death.This was a very colorful piece, i could also see her corpse, as lifeless, and the branches dancing with the wind.Great!-Vlad09
    | Posted on 2004-10-06 00:00:00 | by Damien Vladimir | [ Reply to This ]


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