Description: sorry that i couldnt come up with i title . actually being able to have a title is a very rare thing for me. so these untitled #s will become common. most likely. anyway when i was typing my friend was smacking me so my hand hurts. and she bit me. what kind of person does that?
don't belay the graces you give
your merciful breath heals my sins
but be warned
never accept me at face value
for i trust none
enter my domain from the other side
was that so difficult?
love my darkness
this illict affair
legalize you becoming
reverse your effects on my life
vent your hellfire
release your dark lustings
hidden beyond these burning corridors
destruction never vanquishes
immortal and immoral
lie with me
share this bed of bleeding thornes
drive the tourniquet
and silence my tortured screams
of praise
I like this its very good. i would go back and correct cap errors as in line 4 (i) and i would cap all the words at the beggining of the lines but thats just me and im crazy. I like this very good Pryncess *PS* slap your friend back and bite her to *hehehe*
lovely, I like this but very much, so apologise with my lame critique which is really me just saying well done. 'enter my domain from the other side was that so difficult?' you see, that I like. That I like moochos.
Submission Name: slip inside
