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    dots Submission Name: 40,000 Wordsdots
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    Author: Emerging Soul
    ASL Info:    48/VERY female/Wisconsin
    Elite Ratio:    4.36 - 1240/1114/244
    Words: 132
    Class/Type: Poetry/Comedy
    Total Views: 1003
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 955



    Description:
       Okay, I know this is rediculously mediocre and tongue-in-cheek, bad humor, a waste of talent and cyber-space, but I just noticed that the tabulator of words given on my page was at an even 40,000 and I just had to make a comment about it...it's kind of like watching the odometer on the car dash turn over 100,000 or something...you'll never again see that perfect 00000...

    Anyway...bash me at will, I probably deserve it! *L*


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    40,000 words
    Some helpful and kind
    Some mildly admonishing
    Others, thoughts brought to mind
    Some words have been teasing
    With satire and winks
    Some have been sensual
    (more than some, me-thinks!)
    But whatever I've written
    I like to think I've been fair
    And if I've dropped by your page
    I've left a piece of me there
    So in honor of this moment
    I tip a salute
    For this milestone of sorts
    Makes me more resolute
    To read more than I write
    For my comments to be
    Constructive and honest
    And vocuatiously free (is that a word?)
    And when there's 100,000 words
    (aren't you excited?)
    I'll throw a party on my page
    Everybody's invited!
    I know this is lame
    So I'll end this post-haste
    I'll see you around
    The next comment I paste




    Submitted on 2004-10-06 12:41:11     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I don't know why you would want anyone to bash this...I think it is rather cute. I especially like ...
    And if I've dropped by your page
    I've left a piece of me there
    I will be waiting for the party on your page when you reach 100,000.
    DJ
    | Posted on 2005-09-01 00:00:00 | by Doris Jean | [ Reply to This ]
      oh this is so cute!!! yay for fun poetry on the fly! and for the 40,000 words, congratulations, yo!

    the rhyme is fun and light. i am impressed that you can rhyme so consistently and effectively. thanks!
    | Posted on 2004-10-11 00:00:00 | by perfect_apology | [ Reply to This ]
      Well, I won't quote my number of words because I've issued too many I guess. I thought it was a food idea to write about something like that though. I'm not in a bashing mood today, sorry.
    | Posted on 2004-10-06 00:00:00 | by cuddledumplin | [ Reply to This ]
      8797 words for me so far, and I've only been around 8 days. Not too shabby, I should think. Your piece is so quirky, I love it! It's so good sometimes just to take something miniscule that seems like it wouldn't matter, and make it important. That's 40,000 words you've given to other people, and that is something to be recognized. Bravo to you! Ooo, it's such a cute poem! I'll definitely be reading more of your pieces.
    | Posted on 2004-10-06 00:00:00 | by eener | [ Reply to This ]
      Congrats. I haven't a clue where I'm at. I should guess under a quarter of that. This was nicely rhymed too. Congrats again, see you around the boards,
    Dave
    | Posted on 2004-10-06 00:00:00 | by Sandburg | [ Reply to This ]
      well first of all congratulations on your 40,000 words or whateverthe[censored]. Secondly I'd hate to bash this poem since it is so good. I mean the rhymes made my spine tingle with an evergrowing excitement, a heart pounding pleasure center of pure extasy...
    | Posted on 2004-10-06 00:00:00 | by Smug_Doug | [ Reply to This ]


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