Description: This is the lyrics for a new song. The stanza breaks are actually tempo changes and modulations in the music rather than new verses. Hard Rock Genre. Tell me what you think. I usually write country so this is a bit different for me.
Another Chance -------------------------------------------
Sitting here with too much to do
Who can concentrate on anything
When I'm thinking of you
And what could be
And what almost was
And how it could be
For the two of us
I want to talk about it
Knowing I shouldn't
I want to try again
but I'm thinking you wouldn't.
Where are we going
anywhere? nowhere?
What's everyone saying
Won't listen- Don't care
Only you and what you say to me
Only you and what we could be
Even matters now
Please just give me one more chance
One more night just to show you how
Please another chance
Let me prove myself starting now
When I talk, you keep avoiding my eyes
What emotion's hiding there
I know you're not shy
Is this the end
Don't want it to be
come and spend
more time with me.
You want to avoid it
Knowing we shouldn't
I want to try again
But I'm thinking that you wouldn't.
Where are we going?
Anywhere? Nowhere?
Ignore what there saying
Don't listen- don't care
Only you and what you say to me
Only you and what we could be
Ya only you and what you say to me
Only you and what we could be
Even matters now
Please just give me one more chance
One more night just to show you how
Please another chance
Let me prove myself starting now
Please just another chance
One more night just to show you how
Please another chance
Let me prove myself starting now
Very good, Jay! I'd love to hear you play and sing it!
I used to play Guitar, and still have several, but haven't played one in a long time. I can barely get through one song now before my fingers get too sore!
well didn't I tell ya you can do it hun? I knew you had it in you all the time. And you beat me to the draw! you did it al alone. i can't believe it! All I can say now is wow.
These lyrics are Excellent! The flow was amazing and the structure couldn't of been better,i'd like to hear this with a melody.It would be a hit!Great expressional confession and plea.-Vlad09
wow...this was very good jay...i would not change a thing. it says so much without too many words...perfect song. i wish i could hear the music as i read...playing my own and i'm tone deaf. great write...
This had a Chris Isaac feel to it as I read it-kinda bluesy with a quick tempo at times. I like that you're writing lyrics. I think you do very well with this type of writing!
These lines my fave:
I want to talk about it Knowing I shouldn't I want to try again but I'm thinking you wouldn't.
Submission Name: Another Chance
