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    dots Submission Name: New World Orderdots
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    Author: Damien Vladimir
    ASL Info:    28/m/hollywood/Ca
    Elite Ratio:    3.84 - 122/89/35
    Words: 89
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsNew World Orderdots
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    Isn't there a rage of emotions
    dark waves of devotion
    a plague of extortion
    as voices, and noises explain global torture

    The invasion now begins,
    as deception settles in
    a militia concentration in the winds
    all civilians animate, a reaction as to win
    silly willing men now reaching their end
    for the nations with their legions kill for fun

    The soldier ocean expedition
    as the misssion of malicious acts interpret
    the new beginning of a global coalition
    an extinction of the masses, reformation, new beginning!




    Submitted on 2004-10-06 18:51:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I actually don't see this subject a lot and that surprises me because it is so much in our faces every day.

    Attack after attack all over the world, the ones that make the news and the ones that do not, and technology, geez its all out there in the open.

    I really enjoyed the dose of honesty.
    An observational piece was just what I needed, thanks for sharing.
    | Posted on 2016-07-15 00:00:00 | by lori_tab | [ Reply to This ]
      i had a friend who used to say that the world would be better off if we killed off every other household in the world. Diabolically maniacal dementia to be sure but the truth of it. I've heard rumors that they're going to kill off 4 5ths of us. The worst of this to me…….this could be a good thing………..Christ……feeling tempted?????

    Bruce
    | Posted on 2015-08-30 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]
      I'm with adela, in that one should definitely be able to relate this to the political happenings in the world right now. I like that, under the obvious feelings of destruction but still having hope, there's a little vein of anger that flows through it all. I think that it the combination of those two main feelings makes sense in that, though destruction is occurring now, you always hope that what's going on will ultimately bring about something better.
    | Posted on 2004-10-06 00:00:00 | by lesser_threat | [ Reply to This ]
      I really loved this one, so true and so realistic, Well written and well presented too, the title is very very interesting, it remindes me of two things 1) the wrestling new world order and 2) The famous book "Understanding International conflicts" by "Joseph S. Nye" as the final chapter in this book is called "New World Order", Very good one, Keep it up.
    | Posted on 2004-10-06 00:00:00 | by Yousef | [ Reply to This ]


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