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    dots Submission Name: My Beauty Is My Masterpiecedots
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    Author: cuddledumplin
    ASL Info:    36/ f/UK
    Elite Ratio:    4.08 - 6269/5927/526
    Words: 39
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       This is another feminist one. I'm sorry if that offends anyone. I'm not trying to say that I'm pretty. I'm saying that women are valued for their appearance and men for their work.


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    dotsMy Beauty Is My Masterpiecedots
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    My beauty is my masterpiece,
    and after I am gone
    people will remember nothing of me,
    other than my face and say
    "But my, wasn't she pretty."







    Submitted on 2004-03-03 13:59:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Yikes, bobby! Try reading the descriptions! This was very nice, hon. Very pointed and accurate.
    Oh, btw... there's a passage in Psalms that talks about a woman's long hair being her "crowning glory". <><
    | Posted on 2004-03-23 00:00:00 | by WorththeWait | [ Reply to This ]
      I kind of like this one, even though I am a girl, unfortunately, the world is very judgemental, and stereotypical, and us women are only valued for, our looks.
    | Posted on 2004-03-18 00:00:00 | by ViCiOuSWrItEr | [ Reply to This ]
      "Vanity is satan's favorite sin"... talk about completely missing the point. Good write, expresses what must be a frustrating fact of life for women in a pretty straight forward fashion. Made me think of a passage from Kerouac's "Subterraneans" about expectations based on gender.
    | Posted on 2004-03-03 00:00:00 | by DevilDinosaur | [ Reply to This ]
      they will probably remember you for your poetry too although what you say is true for the most part. men also get away with things we can't-just not fair!
    | Posted on 2004-03-03 00:00:00 | by sierramuse8 | [ Reply to This ]
      i dunno, kinda short and delusional.
    vanity is satan's favorite sin though.
    | Posted on 2004-03-03 00:00:00 | by pestiferous | [ Reply to This ]


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