Description: I haven't been able to drag anything out of my brain that I like the past few days. This is from April, and I'm not 100% keen on it. Sometimes posting is a catalyst for my writing, so I thought I'd give it a shot.
If the World Turned to Ashes -------------------------------------------
Would you care if the entire world
turned to ashes around our bed?
For I love you more than the sum
of my love for everything else,
and with the joy you just gave me,
I could die without regret.
good little love poem. it doesn't have the spark (no pun intended) your other poems have but it is very good nevertheless. I like the feeling you've described. the ultimate bliss when you're together with the person you love completely and you don't want to let go of this moment. I guess I'm a romantic. anyway I like it. well done, Amy.
wow, was it actually that good, I remember my first time, so what if I was all alone, it was that good lmao, very nicely done and as small as it was it carried a loud message, I could hear you hollering here in phila, have a great day...Bob:)
awwww... this is the feeling of contentment... and love... like the whole world could disappear and you prolly wouldnt notice (or give a damn when you finally did) so long as you had your boy beside you... very cool... good luck with fresh writings... my brain has completely stopped and wont give me anything decent at all so i know the frustration of the moment... ciao! (oh and gorgeous foto... i swear you just get more and more gorgeous every foto i see... go you!)