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    dots Submission Name: inside your minddots
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    Author: fallenelf
    ASL Info:    19/f/pa
    Elite Ratio:    2.6 - 43/56/23
    Words: 100
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 266
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       oi vay. ya i wrote this during some crap presentations yesterday. and during lunch. so forgive me. i repeat many words throughout many poems. and perhaps it doesnt make alot of sense. get over it.


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    dotsinside your minddots
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    why do you dream of things that cannot be
    these forbidden desires you deem proper and true
    sometimes im curious
    what you think of yourself
    sometimes you dont believe in anything anymore
    the winds blow your life away
    down through the sands of time
    the actions taken
    the fates youve tricked
    to reach your ultimite means
    whatever you try
    buried wherever you go
    sometimes you just dont matter to yourself
    my persuasion sustains you
    the trails lead you
    perhaps this animosity will fall away
    beneath the nights we spent
    apologizing
    forgive my instincts
    they did not fullfill you unsactioned heart




    Submitted on 2004-10-07 06:25:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I enjoyed this write very much, but the title cries out to be changed. You gave a laundry list of possible titles in your poem.

    Very intense write.
    | Posted on 2004-10-07 00:00:00 | by The Gadfly | [ Reply to This ]



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