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    dots Submission Name: Figment of My Imaginationdots
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    Author: Beast
    ASL Info:    24/ M/ Planet Earth
    Elite Ratio:    4.94 - 232/133/28
    Words: 369
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Passion
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       Just a story about a figment of my imagination..


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    The one true love, the perfect one, the one for me…all those words refer the one thing that I gave up upon…I’ve just gave up the idea of finding such person long time ago…frankly I think that there’s no such person and all these words are only meant to give us hope.
    So, since I –probably- will never find such person I took matters in my own hand and skipped to the next best thing; my imagination.

    Using my imagination I’ve found such person, I found her…she’s more beautiful than I could ever imagine. Don’t ask me to describe her coz I won’t…I can’t, all I know that she –in my eyes- the most beautiful person I’ve ever seen…how or what or things like that I don’t care about…she’s beautiful according to my standards…through my eyes and that’s it…anything else is just details. She’s the one person who cares the most about me, and the only one I care about at the first place.

    I’ve imagined all kind of things about her…about us…some happy…some sad…but we shared them all together. I imagined her smile that’s able to make my day just like that…her frown that’s able to turn all things upside down…her tears that’s able to set me on fire…the fire of rage… a rage powerful enough to wipe armies…fire of emotion…powerful enough to melt the icebergs of the world.

    I’ve imagined everything and anything…so far…she’s probably is the sole reason of my survival…she’s been the purpose I live and struggle for…but what really hurts in all of this; is knowing that she’ll never be more than a figment of my imagination.



    (You don't remember me but I remember you
    I lie awake and try so hard not to think of you
    But who can decide what they dream?
    And dream I do...

    I believe in you
    I’ll give up everything just to find you
    I have to be with you to live to breathe
    You’re taking over me)

    [Evanescence - Taking Over Me]

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    Dedicated to the one who isn’t real…to the love that never existed…to the sole reason of my survival…to my Phoenix…

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      You have some wonderful thoughts about this person from your imagination.... reasonable thoughts, at that. I believe I seen that you are 23, yes? I didn't find the one I was to marry until I was 26. Even then, I tried to push him away- savatage it so I would'nt get hurt. Silly thought- but it used to work. She's out there, my friend. Be patient & don't give up for it's the hope that lights our dark times.
    ~T.
    | Posted on 2006-08-26 00:00:00 | by Tonya V. | [ Reply to This ]
      There is absolutely nothing wrong with living in your head sometimes it is the only thing that makes the world tolerable. From on person's fantasty life to another's congrats and good dreaming
    | Posted on 2004-10-07 00:00:00 | by firebanshee | [ Reply to This ]
      i have the same imaginary person in my mind too! because i grew up with no affection in my life i seem to crave it more than others... so my perfect person is one who gives me that and that person is only in my imagination too. it is hard, yes, when you have this person but you know they are only in your mind. we all want to find the one true person for us but we don't find it so yes we make them up in our head.
    Anyway i will stop babbling!
    Your friend Jes
    | Posted on 2004-10-19 00:00:00 | by Jesimine | [ Reply to This ]
      It is dreams that keep us going isn't it? Where would we be with out them! :)
    The perfect person does not exist not even the Gods or Goddesses were perfect. How boring if we all were? Life is what we strive for, our dreams are what we aim for and accepting life's imperfection is all part of it, growing and learning what fun?? :)
    I liked this piece it makes you think??

    Jess xx
    | Posted on 2004-10-31 00:00:00 | by Jess | [ Reply to This ]
      We all have our "Figments of my imagination", each and every one of us dreams day and night of this perfect "One", and that's not wrong, at least until you find the one you are looking for! it's a good thing to dream and imagine but at the end of the day you must wake up and live in the real world because NO ONE IS PERFECT (never was and never will), so why keep hurting your self?! Read the last line you wrote "but what really hurts in all of this; is knowing that she’ll never be more than a figment of my imagination."
    | Posted on 2004-10-07 00:00:00 | by Yousef | [ Reply to This ]



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