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We speak two different languages: Voice and sign… But the language of unity, Of compassion and friendship remains the same. I speak with my lips: Words flow with ease, Rising and falling with pitch Like music. You speak with you hands: Words form in an intricate dance, They rise and fall with expression Like the tides of the sea. And yet we both understand The same rise and fall Shows we both have feelings and that we both speak from the heart. I listen with my ears: I can hear the laughter of a child Or the music of a full orchestra Any time I wish. You listen with you eyes: You see joy in your smiling children And you take pride when your students sign “I understand.” And yet we both understand that the world Is made up of so much more than noise; We know that there is no need for pointless talking When a simple smile can do. We understand the value of sight and sound: We both listen with our hearts. We are Different, You and I. We speak two different languages. Yet we understand no matter where we are from or how we communicate the language of our hearts is universal. |
Good job, but maybe you should rename the title to Ode To American Sign Language, because I was thinking about age/sex/location on Instant Messanger...maybe I'm just stupid, haha.| Posted on 2004-10-07 00:00:00 | by Mariah | [ Reply to This ] | very nice message and that's all my comment is going to entail, I love how you constantly drove the point home, not only is communication the key of life, but it can be done in so many ways, nicely expressed...Bob:) | | Posted on 2004-10-07 00:00:00 | by poetryman | [ Reply to This ] | The big clump disappearing would really improve the form of your writing. Sign language is hard and there is too a meaningful way to communicate besides talk from the mouth. | | Posted on 2004-10-07 00:00:00 | by AFireInside01 | [ Reply to This ] | This is very powerful. I have an aunt who knows sign language and I know a very little myself, although it is one of my goals before I die to learn sign language. . . this is a very neat poem and I thought your structure was very good. . . up til the last stanza. If I were you, I would break it up to look something more along these lines. . . | We are different yet we understand the language of hearts no matter where we live or how we communicate it's universal when viewed from the heart This is pretty rough but it's just my idea. I didn't really like the big clump at the end. Anyhoo, I think this poem could also be approved by eliminating the first person. . . it would be a challenge but well worth the effort. Great write! -Secret | Posted on 2004-10-07 00:00:00 | by secret moon | [ Reply to This ] | |