why dont you listen?

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why dont you listen?

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Why do you sit here and take this? Believe all the lies That you have fell for But ended up being told that they're aren't true Why do you sit here and cry Because it seems so hard When its really not Stop thinking this! Why do you sit here and not listen To the people who look out for you don't listen to the good points that would help you

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This was a very very good write. I can totally relate, people who sit and take all this [censored] from other people just pisses me off. This would be something I daily express to my mother. Wonderful write, keep up the great work. -Miss M.

| Posted on 2005-11-13 00:00:00 | by fightingirl19 | [ Reply to This ]

very true words if more people would listen to what is said to them they would learn this can even be atributed to the negative comments of people i liked your wording of this poem you just said it all simply but write to the point please take care of yourself and yes family is very important to me you are a bright smart child and you know where you got that from your parents Take Care Ron

| Posted on 2005-10-16 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]

you wrote here very strong words... i love them .. even though i dont like th eend .. but .. well it just sounded like a friend of mine .. well keep on writing and take care! Victor!

| Posted on 2006-03-08 00:00:00 | by vitoko | [ Reply to This ]

i feel you on this one. my sister has this friend that she will not listen to any one about no matter what her friend does she still stays right beside her when she is stabbing my sister in the back. good write. erin

| Posted on 2005-09-13 00:00:00 | by devonsmom03 | [ Reply to This ]

i like this its small and gets the point across n u can def tell ur pissed.. keep up the good work.. i hope your neighbor comes to his senses soon

| Posted on 2005-07-18 00:00:00 | by scardnscared | [ Reply to This ]

i think that this is a perdy good, somewhat, poem/thoughts. i think it was short but sometimes the right person can explain a lot of feelings and deep emotions or thoughts in a short piece. Personally i dont think that you are that right person. althought it does relate to everyones everyday life. I too have been in that position where i see what my girl friend doest. i try and try to warn her but i dont think they get it. i like it. nice job.

| Posted on 2005-01-20 00:00:00 | by PookiezBookie | [ Reply to This ]

its so much easier to just take a step back from your true self, and play games with other people, its gives for something to do and it makes it so you never have to really reveal yourself but still be liked, or wanted. im glad you can look through all of that, but dont let yourself get dragged down too.

| Posted on 2004-10-13 00:00:00 | by Josh | [ Reply to This ]

I can't really comment that much on random thoughts because there are random and have no structure or flow in mind that can be improved on. However, I will say that writing is one of the best ways to get feelings out and it always works for me...as long as you have stuff to write about that is...

| Posted on 2004-10-08 00:00:00 | by JimweiZERO | [ Reply to This ]

People just have selective hearing and they only want to hear what comes out of their mouths not other peoples.I think that is disrespectful and they need to learn better manners

| Posted on 2004-10-08 00:00:00 | by gothicsweetness | [ Reply to This ]

People don't listen to what other people tell them because some people actually think that you're lying and then they have a reason to call it a lie. People need to sit and listen and then take what they know and try to fix it right

| Posted on 2004-10-07 00:00:00 | by gothicsweetness | [ Reply to This ]

ooo... very true thing is... no one wants to listen... no one wants to be wrong... especially when it comes to love... im not quite sure the first stanza is worded properly.. perhaps it could go something like... Why do you sit here and take this? Believe all the lies That you fall for But end up being told they aren't true i think that works slightly better but it is fully up to you what you do with it. anyways try not to get too frustrated with him not listening to you though im sure one day he will sure wish he did...

| Posted on 2004-12-06 00:00:00 | by Someones Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]

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