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    dots Submission Name: ...JERKdots
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    Author: winged_writer_robyn
    ASL Info:    16/f/wa
    Elite Ratio:    3.36 - 116/162/44
    Words: 102
    Class/Type: Poetry/Venting
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    Description:
       God, some boys are STU-PID! What part of "I'M TAKEN" does he not get?! for three years I waited. not a word. but now that i have mentioned Doug, he flips. we've been friends since we were born. why didn't he say anything when he had the chance? i even asked he plain as day if he wanted us to be an "item". God, he is stupid! grrrr


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    dots...JERKdots
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    you didn't say
    anything
    you were
    SILENT
    for THREE YEARS
    I'm not a
    MIND READER
    How was I to know
    That
    you LIKED me?!
    are you as
    STUPID
    as you sound?!
    You expect me
    to come crawling
    into your arms
    because
    you LIKE me?!
    NEWSFLASH:
    I'm in LOVE
    with someone else!
    I'll admit
    there was a time
    when I thought
    you were perfect
    for me
    but you were
    SILENT
    So I gave up
    You weren't worth my time
    And now you want me back...
    you can't have
    Everything you want.
    I learned that
    Three years ago.




    Submitted on 2004-10-08 15:23:59     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      hard out... this is sure venting and its good to get it out... its so frustrating when this happens though... when you prolly both like each other at the same time and yet for whatevr reason it doesnt become anything until one of you moves on and finds someone new... but yeah... fully his loss... he was the one who didnt seize the day... carpe diem baby!
    | Posted on 2004-10-08 00:00:00 | by Someones Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow, I totally get what you are sayin' it's happened to me quite a few times! Im in love with two guys...when I wasn't with either of them the one that is my best friend also never expressed his feelings for me, but when I got with the one Im REALLY in love with, he flipped out! Check out my poems, you'll hear about one of the guys...Michael! The other one...Casey is in jail and is still my best friend! Now I always said I would only have sex if I was in love...I kept my word so far...these are the only two guys Ive had sex with. I hope everything works out for you. Love sucks, but its also very cool. But most of all LOVE IS HARD!
    | Posted on 2004-10-08 00:00:00 | by Brooke | [ Reply to This ]
      Whoa, I understand what you are saying and this is a great thing to write. You are so right. That guy should have told you before. I guess there is no turning back. . .or is there? I guess the world will never know. Some guys do have problems coming out and saying it and then they do at the last minute and it's too late. I guess girls will never know how boys work. One time I went through that.
    | Posted on 2004-10-08 00:00:00 | by Chicool2 | [ Reply to This ]


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