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I Thought of You


Author: Kalidoscopeeyes
ASL Info:    18/f
Elite Ratio:    3.64 - 122 /151 /29
Words: 121
Class/Type: Misc /Misc
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Sometimes I feel the complete opposite of this, but right now I'm in a bad mood and am lashing out at everyone. So take whatever you want from this...


I Thought of You



I can't do this anymore.
I'm closing this door to my heart
Because I'm sick of you.
Go figure this world out for yourself.
Why am I so lonely?
Because of people like you,
Coming to me only when it's convenient.
It wasn't easy for me to be vulnerable,
To have complete trust in a friend.
And you've abused that power you have over me,
You've cut deeper than any blade could
Because you've discovered my little secret:
You can run away for as long as you want
And come back knowing that I'll be here,
Waiting to hear about your latest adventure.
I hate you.
Just look at what you've done.
I'm here, standing, alone,
And still I miss you.




Submitted on 2004-10-09 17:15:55     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  That's how I feel about my Ex_boyfriend. I hate him so much, but i still miss him. I love that poem. Because it just speaks to the heart.

^Monkey^
| Posted on 2004-10-09 00:00:00 | by Monkey | [ Reply to This ]
  once again I praise your work kalidoscopeeyes. this is brilliant.
the only thing I would say pertaining to making it better is that, in my opinion, you should put a couple spaces here and there.
for instance, after "go figure this world out for yourself." I think you should skip down a space and start the next paragraph with "Why am I so lonely?" because when you say 'why am I so lonely' you are starting a new idea.
nonetheless, this is still a good piece and I love it.
| Posted on 2004-10-18 00:00:00 | by max | [ Reply to This ]


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