I Thought of You
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Sometimes I feel the complete opposite of this, but right now I'm in a bad mood and am lashing out at everyone. So take whatever you want from this...
I Thought of You
I can't do this anymore. I'm closing this door to my heart Because I'm sick of you. Go figure this world out for yourself. Why am I so lonely? Because of people like you, Coming to me only when it's convenient. It wasn't easy for me to be vulnerable, To have complete trust in a friend. And you've abused that power you have over me, You've cut deeper than any blade could Because you've discovered my little secret: You can run away for as long as you want And come back knowing that I'll be here, Waiting to hear about your latest adventure. I hate you. Just look at what you've done. I'm here, standing, alone, And still I miss you. |
Submitted on 2004-10-09 17:15:55 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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| That's how I feel about my Ex_boyfriend. I hate him so much, but i still miss him. I love that poem. Because it just speaks to the heart. ^Monkey^ | Posted on 2004-10-09 00:00:00 | by Monkey | [ Reply to This ] | once again I praise your work kalidoscopeeyes. this is brilliant. | the only thing I would say pertaining to making it better is that, in my opinion, you should put a couple spaces here and there. for instance, after "go figure this world out for yourself." I think you should skip down a space and start the next paragraph with "Why am I so lonely?" because when you say 'why am I so lonely' you are starting a new idea. nonetheless, this is still a good piece and I love it. | Posted on 2004-10-18 00:00:00 | by max | [ Reply to This ] | |
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