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    Author: winged_writer_robyn
    ASL Info:    16/f/wa
    Elite Ratio:    3.36 - 116/162/44
    Words: 108
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 924
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 746



    Description:
       oh god, this is NOT happening.... sorry in the middle of the ultra nervous breakdown. HE has found me. i cant say anymore. but if you want to know, ask in a PM. OH, GOD!....ok i'll tell you one thing: IT'S NOT GOOD! he's a bad ex.


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    YOU’RE back
    How the Hell did you find me
    In my world
    My sanctuary?
    I thought I escaped
    Your games
    Your lies
    The pain you put me through
    Was behind me
    Until
    I saw those eyes
    And then I knew
    That night
    That YOU
    Were back.
    To haunt
    To scare
    To reopen the wounds
    That bled so long ago.
    How did you know
    Where I was hiding?
    It’s been so long
    Since we’ve spoke
    And yet
    YOU’RE everywhere
    YOU’RE in my mind
    My thoughts
    My dreams
    My worst nightmare
    Has finally come true
    YOU found me
    That night in the rain
    That was YOU…




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