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    dots Submission Name: My saviordots
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    Author: winged_writer_robyn
    ASL Info:    16/f/wa
    Elite Ratio:    3.36 - 116/162/44
    Words: 51
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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       another for doug. he just got done talking to me. he protected me from myself yet again. yeah... i love him


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    dotsMy saviordots
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    Shield me from myself
    the darkness is so overwhelming
    unlike your light which warms
    my soul.

    Protect me from myself
    the chaos is so overpowering
    unlike your sensibility which calms
    my mind.

    Shelter me from myself
    the weakness is so overbearing
    unlike your strength which saves
    my heart.




    Submitted on 2004-10-09 21:57:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Ahh, I just noticed something, your picture thing is Puss in Boots. He's soo cute! Anyway, now that I have gotten that out, it's good that you have someone like that to help you. Everyone needs a "savior".
    After reading themadgerman's comment I just realized that this could be taken in a religious sense, hmm wasn't thinking of it in that way. Interesting...
    | Posted on 2004-10-11 00:00:00 | by Delirium | [ Reply to This ]


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