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My savior

Author: winged_writer_robyn
ASL Info:    16/f/wa
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Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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another for doug. he just got done talking to me. he protected me from myself yet again. yeah... i love him

My savior

Shield me from myself
the darkness is so overwhelming
unlike your light which warms
my soul.

Protect me from myself
the chaos is so overpowering
unlike your sensibility which calms
my mind.

Shelter me from myself
the weakness is so overbearing
unlike your strength which saves
my heart.

Submitted on 2004-10-09 21:57:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Ahh, I just noticed something, your picture thing is Puss in Boots. He's soo cute! Anyway, now that I have gotten that out, it's good that you have someone like that to help you. Everyone needs a "savior".
After reading themadgerman's comment I just realized that this could be taken in a religious sense, hmm wasn't thinking of it in that way. Interesting...
| Posted on 2004-10-11 00:00:00 | by Delirium | [ Reply to This ]

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