Description: Actually, there is a story behind this poem. I saw on TV this girl who was staring at a pit where her grandfather will be buried. But then, out of depression, she jumped into the pit and was buried alive because they didn't notice that she was down there. Poor thing!
a story made into such a beautiful poem is really good,really expresses a lot about the truth of life
the way u have written the poem its really gone into my memory and is unshakeable well i cant even imagine of being buried alive,but there are true instances of these things that have taken place
this is one good poem that i have read in ages
Tihs poem made me clauterphobic. Seriously. Having some trouble catching my breath here. Since most graves are 6 ft deep, I like how it seemed to depict that since two people were "at rest" there (even though one took a while) it was 12 feet. If that makes sense and what you were intending. Good. ~BCute
this is one of those poems that if the reader wants they could themselves ruin by asking stupid questions of curiousity like. " what is she dead or something blatant like that" let's not ask and let's just embroid our elevated minds with the wonderful adorments the words give for once, please. i love the unshakeabel ground and the deafening finality of this write. it's exceptionally romantic and needs to only be admired. good job, love.
i can't imagine the horror of being buried alive. it would be the ultimate panic, fear, and you painted the picture in my head very well. very good. the last line- 12 feet. so... i don't know...abrupt? it ends there and thats it. i liked it thank you.