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She was cast aside once, forgotten, and she set her mind on never being wanted. She thinks that she's not good enough. And she's too scared to get into a relationship with anyone else because she tinks that she'll be hurt again. It's rather bittersweet if I do say so myself.
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Here alone On this shelf Put away By someone Else Always needing To let go Never wanting You to know Me I am just This girl In this Nonsense world Here alone On this shelf Discarded By someone Else And I’ve cried Too many Times To let you See me now All alone On this shelf Put away by someone Else Never wanting You to see Just assuming That you’d be As unhappy Here with me Don’t remove Me From this shelf Put away by someone Else I’ve been hurt But not By you If you care Than please leave Too I will stay Here by myself All alone Upon this shelf Put away By someone else |
Submitted on 2004-10-10 22:21:41 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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| I guess I've never felt this way. But I can only imagine though others pain what it must feel like. Please don't let one persons let down prevent you from finding the right one for you. I am 28 and have left many men in tears yet they seem to all have eventually bounced back and found their true love. People go through many lovers and many friends to find their tru matches! aldergrovegal | Posted on 2004-10-12 00:00:00 | by aldergrovegal | [ Reply to This ] | Good job getting across what you were trying to say. I just want to hug her and introduce to some great friends I know. Poor thing. No one should ever feel that way. I felt her helplessness and pain. Awww... Nobody should be left on the shelf. Very good piece... | | Posted on 2004-10-10 00:00:00 | by eener | [ Reply to This ] | You captured the pain and hurt of being alone. And kind of being tossed aside by life. I loved it. So much feeling. Keep writing | | Posted on 2004-10-10 00:00:00 | by FeelingAlive | [ Reply to This ] | I loved this. I know how it feels to be alone. It made me think about how some people sort of get left "On a shelf". Personally, I wouldn't change or add anything to this piece. It made a good point and I believe more people should think about those people that are "left on a shelf". Good Job! | | Posted on 2004-10-10 00:00:00 | by BlackAsh | [ Reply to This ] | |
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