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    dots Submission Name: at timesdots
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    Author: painfullyme
    ASL Info:    23/F/MA
    Elite Ratio:    2.86 - 335/456/72
    Words: 93
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
    Total Views: 372
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    Description:
       this is the product of some serious reflection and the lack of meds for 5 days.
    let me know what you think.


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    dotsat timesdots
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    at times i miss the metal
    the cold steel across my skin
    the relief as liquid life flows
    releasing pain from within

    at times i miss the feeling
    of bleeding out self-hate
    finding solace in mutilation
    and contentment with my fate

    at times i long for solutions
    to the problems in my heart
    that don't involve a silver blade,
    ripping mortal shells apart

    at times i long for an ending
    a path through uncertainty
    a way to steal some piece of mind
    and be at ease with me

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    Submitted on 2004-10-11 00:40:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      good work but if this is a reflection of your thoughts i think that you need to see a counsellor. i thought that this was an insightful piece well done!
    | Posted on 2004-10-11 00:00:00 | by lilmiznaughty04 | [ Reply to This ]
      It brings back memories, both depressing and, finally, triumphant. The depressing of when I thought solutions were the silver blade, the triumphant when I realized I no longer used it, had found solutions without my little pet blade.
    I understand how you feel,
    soldier on
    Kitty aka Cat Girl
    | Posted on 2004-10-11 00:00:00 | by Cat | [ Reply to This ]



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