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Author:	Cai
ASL Info:	17/f/MA
Elite Ratio:	2.15 - 1162/401/71
Words:	118

Class/Type:	Misc/Misc
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Un-Titleable dots

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I lost the sense of the word sanity
And turned it around to suit my disposition

What if the point to life
Is that there is really no point at all?
If we all are going to die
Why should crimes matter?

I lost the sense of the word moral
Because I do not believe in God.

If there is no being of power
Then there is no heaven or hell
If there is no heaven or hell
Why should crimes matter?

Such sick protruding thoughts penetrate my mind
I have lost the sense of holding back

I know the truth about the world
nothing really matters

Suit yourself.
I will.

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  I like it too. I think anyone remotely intelligent has had these thoughts (but not written them down). I think you could call it "Sanity and God" or something.
| Posted on 2004-10-12 00:00:00 | by cuddledumplin | [ Reply to This ]
  I like this probably because i can relate. This existential angst I think runs through all of our mind; I could be just egocentric. Anyway I do believe in "God" Not in the biblical sense such as heaven and hell, sits on the throne with a giant phallus, but still I belive in a unifying force. This has a feel of thinking out loud, but in a very rational way. good write
peace
| Posted on 2004-10-11 00:00:00 | by shaman | [ Reply to This ]
  very cool beans..this one is great cai! you did a really awesome job expressing how you feel about your role in life and how you perception of the world is...this is really really good...
going on my favorites...i love when writers talk about their view on how we got here or what matters in life...i like yours best so far!

rhaine
| Posted on 2004-10-11 00:00:00 | by Rhaine | [ Reply to This ]
  first, i think "suit myself" would be a good title, but that's just me...
second: I LOVE THIS! it's like opening a book and finding a new world. you put your mind, your beliefs onto paper for the world to read. impressive. i really like this.
| Posted on 2004-10-11 00:00:00 | by winged_writer_robyn | [ Reply to This ]
  I think that you say a lot with this write, about your opinions, and the way you put them makes this very powerful. I don't quite see how the last two lines fit with the rest of the write though. I think because you are just describing all the way through and then suddenly its like you are talking directly to someone. It just seems a little off at the end but the rest of the write was great!
| Posted on 2004-12-01 00:00:00 | by JimweiZERO | [ Reply to This ]

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