Torn Away
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mom and i fought today....for the last time. for all you guys, i'm getting the f**k out of here. i love doug dearly, but i can't stand hurting like this at home. all i need is my brother's concent, then i can leave. i might try to stay together with doug, but there's a lot of distance between washington and ohio. for those that are christians, keep me in your prayers. thanks
Torn Away
Ugh... Not... Again... I CANNOT STAND the fighting between you and me anymore. You heard me: I'm leaving out that door as soon as I buy the plane ticket home. This...This HELLHOLE isn't HOME there is no unity here; "family" is not a familiar word in this cursed house. I'm leaving to Ohio to live with Roy... I don't care what you say. Hell, I'd leave today if i had thought of it sooner. This has become too much to handle; I'm tired of turning to a blade every time my heart bleeds. Soon that blade will inch up against the pulsing vein because I'm sick and tired of the pain. You caused this. You've torn me away from the one good thing in my life. The only thing I actually love; That loves me back. You don't love me. You wouldn't put me through this if you did. So now I'm being torn away from life itself because you refuse to let me live. |
Submitted on 2004-10-11 19:26:09 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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| I love this. . . your short, choppy lines (which really aren't choppy at all) really got the point across to me. The interesting rhyme-scheme really caught my eye. . . made me think of my favorite poem that I ever wrote, which I need to post. I'm really sorry about your mother and you, I'll keep both of you in my prayers. The seventeenth line I would change to: "family" is an unfamiliar word That's basically it. Good write. -Secret | Posted on 2004-10-11 00:00:00 | by secret moon | [ Reply to This ] | Isn't it funny funny how ignorant people can be at times? When leaving simply, doesn't appear to be the wisest way out,instaed they stick around to fight another round, just to cry even harder th next time you get knocked out. But you got it! You left that intolerable fool,didn't ya'?Good for you.lol!-vlad09 | | Posted on 2004-10-11 00:00:00 | by Damien Vladimir | [ Reply to This ] | i can tell that this was formed from pure anger even hate.. sigh.. it leads me to believe that you are blinded by it at the moment.. i can say little because i don't know what to say really.. just i hope things work out for you.. i feel sorry for doug though.. two people who love each other shouldn't be kept apart.. well all the best.. never know what the dawn brings.. | Adam | Posted on 2004-10-11 00:00:00 | by Pyrosis | [ Reply to This ] | |
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