This is disturbing. The rhyme only makes it moreso. OK, I'm glad you want this to happen, so maybe it'll happen to you over me. You have some grammar problem. It should be "everything's" or "everything is." It's also "intact."
i loved this poem. and although the previous person who commented mentioned some "capitalization issues", it was clear that you capitalized only the first line of a stanza, and that's fine. i have certain ways of capitalizing, depending on the feel of the poem. anyway, i loved it, keep up the good work!
...Wow. Very powerful and sensual, and I totally agree with it's label as 'Dark'. You've done an awesome job on this, it conveys your ideas very well. Maybe some spelling and capitalization issues, but altogether I absolutely LOVED this.