Eh, I can sort of relate to it. But it really leaves me wondering what you have to do, which is good I suppose. I re-read it a couple tiems and still didn't know what your choice really was. It could be many things, not just relationship. I could come back to this poem whenever I have a choice to make. Good Job!
I just read "torn away" so that I would understand this one better. . . but I'm still not sure who Doug is, so if you could clear that up for me? Anyhoo, I wouldn't change anything except for to say, on the fourth line of the second stanza, rephrase it to this. . . I'llhave to fight for my life Or something along those lines, anyway. Good write! -Secret