I wish that I could have written that well when I was sixteen. anyway I hope you don't mind I gonna add this to my favorites... for a couple of reasons. one this piece was very well thought out. the articulate manner in which it was written is normally some thing that you gain through experience writing and I am curious to see what you are capable of in the future. this was great. keep up the good work.
'Fateful Star' is in the now great tradition of your powerful, emotive poetry. The timeless yet temporate nature of the poem is testament to the age old influences that you have drawn on. There was a wide variety of imagery (the star lighting the road) and symbolism (fateful star-star of David) are once again very powerful images. You are definitely at your best writing about something dear to you, and evidently the 'star' is one such theme.