The Prison of Fantasy
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The Prison of Fantasy
The prison of fantasy, fantasy is brain asking sharply for meth, and amphetamines a train of a cargo so heavy,offtrack leaves reality Celebrity tendencies eating me i've dreamed of this day since the torturing the agony, MTV came to be but now i see, not the t.v. Attention, a lesson a drug acceptance Deception, i question my fathers teachings.. which is, the prison of fantasy, fantasy a prison designed by me, yes for me the reason was my t.v., following the dream of my wicked desire to leave this reality It's alive! a lie, sublime and blinds i've come to find with crystal eyes the truth that lies , it's the grime grisaille It's the, the prison of fantasy, fantasy a prison designed by me, yes for me the reason was my t.v., following the dream of my wicked desire to leave this reality the prison of fantasy, i can't leave the key of my freedom was lost at sea the face that i have shall belong and be... in MTV,your t.v., history! |
Submitted on 2004-10-12 19:09:45 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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I can relate to this as an observation. Its sad and its common. | | Posted on 2015-08-31 00:00:00 | by lori_tab | [ Reply to This ] | Wow that poem was very intresting i think that you basically described todays youth but the only thing i didnt like about it was i couldnt find any visual words which are always great to have in poems because it creates a new world window that they can view for themselves. | | Posted on 2004-10-12 00:00:00 | by doom_gloomgirl | [ Reply to This ] | I'm assuming you've got the melody to go with this since its such a complete job. Depressed lyrics are not my thing but youve got a nice cohesive piece here. There's enough structure that it hints of it's tune and rythm. I liked the turn of the chorus at the end ( I use it a lot myself) | jan | Posted on 2004-10-12 00:00:00 | by jaycee | [ Reply to This ] | |
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