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The Prison of Fantasy


Author: Damien Vladimir
ASL Info:    28/m/hollywood/Ca
Elite Ratio:    3.84 - 122 /89 /35
Words: 180
Class/Type: Lyrics /Depressed
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The Prison of Fantasy



The prison of fantasy, fantasy
is brain asking sharply for meth, and amphetamines
a train of a cargo so heavy,offtrack leaves reality

Celebrity tendencies eating me
i've dreamed of this day since the torturing
the agony, MTV came to be
but now i see, not the t.v.

Attention,
a lesson
a drug acceptance
Deception,
i question
my fathers teachings..

which is,
the prison of fantasy, fantasy
a prison designed by me, yes for me
the reason was my t.v., following
the dream of my wicked desire to leave this reality

It's alive!
a lie,
sublime and blinds
i've come to find with crystal eyes
the truth that lies , it's the grime grisaille

It's the,
the prison of fantasy, fantasy
a prison designed by me, yes for me
the reason was my t.v., following
the dream of my wicked desire to leave this reality

the prison of fantasy, i can't leave
the key of my freedom was lost at sea
the face that i have shall belong and be...
in MTV,your t.v., history!




Submitted on 2004-10-12 19:09:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I can relate to this as an observation. Its sad and its common.
| Posted on 2015-08-31 00:00:00 | by lori_tab | [ Reply to This ]
  Wow that poem was very intresting i think that you basically described todays youth but the only thing i didnt like about it was i couldnt find any visual words which are always great to have in poems because it creates a new world window that they can view for themselves.
| Posted on 2004-10-12 00:00:00 | by doom_gloomgirl | [ Reply to This ]
  I'm assuming you've got the melody to go with this since its such a complete job. Depressed lyrics are not my thing but youve got a nice cohesive piece here. There's enough structure that it hints of it's tune and rythm. I liked the turn of the chorus at the end ( I use it a lot myself)
jan
| Posted on 2004-10-12 00:00:00 | by jaycee | [ Reply to This ]


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