it had no impact onm me because of all the poems that i've been reading.might there be a spelling error in the title?it seemed to me that it was a social and positive little poem.i wish that i could say more but you have already received many other comments so i'll just leave it at that for now.good luck and fare well.
I think that because this is put so simply, it gets to reader vey well and the message is definately clear. I can also relate and I read this with a kind of stutter in it, like it was in some way unprepared, and that situs the genre perfectly in my view. Good write.
I love poems that say a lot with a few words. Sometimes I find that my attention span won't last through a really long poem.(darn my ADHD) But I must say, that you do a wonderful job. It takes some skill to write something that still makes sense and captures a feeling completly without writing a poem that is a half a page long. Great job.