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    dots Submission Name: Once Againdots
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    Author: sug90
    ASL Info:    14/F/U.S.A.
    Elite Ratio:    3.21 - 69/93/34
    Words: 62
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 296
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 514



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    dotsOnce Againdots
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    Once again
    I'm at a
    Dead-end
    And once again
    I'm erasing
    My pain
    Closing my eyes
    As I walk off
    This cliff
    Someday
    I'll find
    Nothing is left
    Hearing things
    In a silent
    Room
    Their voice
    Sneering my
    Name
    My heart
    beating
    To a NEW drum
    And once again
    Through the
    Distance hum
    I just want
    Someone's shoulder
    To cry on




    Submitted on 2004-10-13 22:02:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      WOW, I really liked this peice, short but real. I wouldn't change a thing, Keep up the good works and I'll keep reading them. illusions35959
    | Posted on 2004-10-13 00:00:00 | by illusions35959 | [ Reply to This ]
      When I read the first few lines I was a little unsure I would like it, but I'm pretty impressed. You pulled this off quite well. Full of emotion and simple language that gets the point across.
    | Posted on 2004-10-13 00:00:00 | by DewdropMartini | [ Reply to This ]
      And once gian

    fix this line and you have a masterpiece, very moving, and very well done, I loved the emotional flow, so talented and yet so young, keep writing and brighten up the world...Bob:)
    | Posted on 2004-10-13 00:00:00 | by poetryman | [ Reply to This ]



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