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This Empire


Author: Voodoo_Lounge
ASL Info:    21/F/OH
Elite Ratio:    2.29 - 408 /588 /171
Words: 46
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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This is my most recent poem. I think i like this one.


This Empire



Weak with worry,
Gilded with guilt.
Always to suffer
This empire we built.
Cruel and so lovely;
To carve without haste,
Into the heart
Of this inhuman waste.
Years upon years,
Always i wait-
For a man that won't love me
And always is late.




Submitted on 2004-10-13 23:05:05     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I have just one question, I really wasn't clear on what the empire was that "we built". Is it love..marriage? or am I totally off in left field on this one. Great thought provoking statements. Good job!
| Posted on 2004-10-13 00:00:00 | by AFireInside01 | [ Reply to This ]
  Such a sad poem. It provokes a lot of thought: IS the empire your life, ahouse or love? Is it false on the outside or mearly false alll the way through?
| Posted on 2004-10-13 00:00:00 | by amboehm | [ Reply to This ]
  OK, this is a nice poem, deep thought and tenderness as well as boldness, keep up the good work and I'll keep reading. illusions35959
| Posted on 2004-10-13 00:00:00 | by illusions35959 | [ Reply to This ]
  i LOVE this one. you took a deep thought and put it into a perfect poem. i don't have anything to critique, i loved it.
| Posted on 2004-10-13 00:00:00 | by aliciaflower04 | [ Reply to This ]


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