Love & Affection

Author: Timmy S. Edgar ASL Info:    38 male Melb, Australia Elite Ratio:    2.6 - 263 /200 /71 Words: 107

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Love & Affection

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My solitary has ceased! My hearts been set free See I have been released I welcome you affectionately Do you feel like company? Cause when I spend my time It’s much better time spent with you! Is it for you that my love is designed? Would you clear up my doubts? Would you give me direction? As I don’t want you, to miss out On my love and affection! See I got so much, love to give May I shed some girl, onto you? Come closer hun, come on lets live See girl, my feelings for you, are true!

Submitted on 2004-03-06 00:57:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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again great write* i am going to know how to write great love poetry by the time i read all these. look forward to reading more*

| Posted on 2004-12-13 00:00:00 | by _winky_ | [ Reply to This ]

very beautiful ...nice imagery..nice everything i really liked this ne great

| Posted on 2004-03-06 00:00:00 | by TastemyTears | [ Reply to This ]

This is nice, but do you always write love poetry? Perhaps you could write about something else. I like to do the character thing myself.

| Posted on 2004-03-06 00:00:00 | by cuddledumplin | [ Reply to This ]

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