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    dots Submission Name: Love & Affectiondots
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    Author: Timmy S. Edgar
    ASL Info:    38 male Melb, Australia
    Elite Ratio:    2.6 - 263/200/71
    Words: 107
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 1113
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    Description:
       i Like to put myself in character and place myself into a situation and see what emotions it prevokes thisa was one of these occassions



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    dotsLove & Affectiondots
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    My solitary has ceased!
    My hearts been set free
    See I have been released
    I welcome you affectionately

    Do you feel like company?
    Cause when I spend my time
    Itís much better time spent with you!
    Is it for you that my love is designed?

    Would you clear up my doubts?
    Would you give me direction?
    As I donít want you, to miss out
    On my love and affection!

    See I got so much, love to give
    May I shed some girl, onto you?
    Come closer hun, come on lets live
    See girl, my feelings for you, are true!




    Submitted on 2004-03-06 00:57:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      again great write* i am going to know how to write great love poetry by the time i read all these. look forward to reading more*
    | Posted on 2004-12-13 00:00:00 | by _winky_ | [ Reply to This ]
      very beautiful ...nice imagery..nice everything i really liked this ne great
    | Posted on 2004-03-06 00:00:00 | by TastemyTears | [ Reply to This ]
      This is nice, but do you always write love poetry? Perhaps you could write about something else. I like to do the character thing myself.
    | Posted on 2004-03-06 00:00:00 | by cuddledumplin | [ Reply to This ]


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