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Love & Affection

Author: Timmy S. Edgar
ASL Info:    38 male Melb, Australia
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Words: 107
Class/Type: Misc /Misc
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i Like to put myself in character and place myself into a situation and see what emotions it prevokes thisa was one of these occassions

Love & Affection

My solitary has ceased!
My hearts been set free
See I have been released
I welcome you affectionately

Do you feel like company?
Cause when I spend my time
It’s much better time spent with you!
Is it for you that my love is designed?

Would you clear up my doubts?
Would you give me direction?
As I don’t want you, to miss out
On my love and affection!

See I got so much, love to give
May I shed some girl, onto you?
Come closer hun, come on lets live
See girl, my feelings for you, are true!

Submitted on 2004-03-06 00:57:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  again great write* i am going to know how to write great love poetry by the time i read all these. look forward to reading more*
| Posted on 2004-12-13 00:00:00 | by _winky_ | [ Reply to This ]
  very beautiful ...nice imagery..nice everything i really liked this ne great
| Posted on 2004-03-06 00:00:00 | by TastemyTears | [ Reply to This ]
  This is nice, but do you always write love poetry? Perhaps you could write about something else. I like to do the character thing myself.
| Posted on 2004-03-06 00:00:00 | by cuddledumplin | [ Reply to This ]

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